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Needs more work on it

The biggest problem here is using weak instruments . The mix suffers by unregulated volumes (percussion is without needed energy). The lowest tones are missing here, the same case with trebles. Also, we have here lacks in the structure - nothing really happens over two minutes and the arrangement is indigent (what about adding arpeggios, sidechained pads or some catchy plucks?). Keep working, hope the next tunes will be better.

Norato responds:

Lol this song is perfect if you dont like it so its your bad not mine xDD

http://jakim.org.pl/ - welcome!

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