Needs more work on it
The biggest problem here is using weak instruments . The mix suffers by unregulated volumes (percussion is without needed energy). The lowest tones are missing here, the same case with trebles. Also, we have here lacks in the structure - nothing really happens over two minutes and the arrangement is indigent (what about adding arpeggios, sidechained pads or some catchy plucks?). Keep working, hope the next tunes will be better.